Doing double-duty today, incorporating a word list prompt from Poetic Asides, and the NaPoWriMo challenge to do something in “double” — in my case, I wrote in non-rhyming couplets. I used six out of eight words: flat, ring, lavish, vessel, paper and tooth. Just couldn’t get gaudy and blacklist in there. This was tough, and not very successful, but it’s the half-way point in the month, and I can’t stop posting now! 🙂
She put the ring on the counter, next to the coffee pot, and started walking
through the fields, flat and white as paper, now and for most of the year.
She would miss the sky, revealing so much depending on the shape of the clouds,
and the way the wind would chisel at her front tooth if she dared to smile.
She came with the hope she could be a vessel for something — grace
or contentment. Nothing so lavish as joy, but together they tried.
She left emptier, a familiar feeling, but by spring — distant spring,
her footprints would melt away. Even the coldest winters are forgotten.
This Is Not A Literary Journal suggests writing a poem using Robert Peake’s word generator. I’ve used this before and posted the result here. It’s a great tool to take you unexpected places, and if nothing else, check out the rest of Peake’s site, and read three of his picturesque poems here.
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I like where you went with this. The bleakness of the land and heart.